Feed Back R2-44

you have some good posts that are really interesting...and you've picked out the main points in each of your posts which is why you don't have many...

Your ideas seem really good and original and clear! The shots you've taken also make the children's opening sequence realistic.
Your opening sequence are detailed, however maybe give some examples of the ones you have listed...
The shot list is very detailed. You have taken a lot of different photos with a wide range of angles and distance shots

but over all well done, good work!